My Ball Point Pen

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My Ball Point Pen

My ball point pen
It gives my thoughts a voice
that will be recorded untill
either burned, or torned
I spill my guts through my pen
Alot of hours I spend
Hoping somebody will comprehend
my mechanism
and how I tic
by the words that I write with my ball point pen
Sometimes the things that I write
I don't even understand
I just know that good thoughs shouldn't be wasted
they have to be writen down

Only then can you judge

If what you wrote was a waste of time

And ink.....

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Marsink commented on My Ball Point Pen

01-19-2010

I don't use a pen as often as some, but the keyboard works pretty good, too. You can't always know what a thought or theme will become until you get going!

jadedoll

01/19/2010

just get started and see where it takes you,,,

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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