My Battle Cry

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My Battle Cry

My reality is not always acctuality so pay attention and follow me. Driven by thoughts of good versus evil, wanting to know which way I should go. I can't help but to know the pain of being good, but the pleasures of evil are so misunderstood. Possesed by a passion, these words of attraction my mind doesn't stop, my heart racing, debating. Reality, it's what you think you can see, but sometimes for me, all i see is misery. People just dying from the inside out, too much doubt. They need to stand up and shout. Should I take hold of my dream or just let the wolrd be. Should I belive, too many reasons unseen whats it mean, could it all be a dream. No pain in my dreams, so I know this is real, where do I go, how should I feel. Too many tears have flooded my face, been in this race for too many years. Get up and go, always on the move, whats it prove, I still don't know the truth. I try to be good but the evil keeps pulling me, forces unseen should i believe. Take hold of my actions and do what is right, stand up and fight ,no more taking flight. Must win the battle, I feel no remorse, for the evil is gone now I chose my own course.

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WordSlinger commented on My Battle Cry

02-05-2009

Must win the battle, I feel no remorse, for the evil is gone now I chose my own course. My Fav

Bladebearer commented on My Battle Cry

02-02-2009

Totally awesome!!

AveryPGuden commented on My Battle Cry

02-01-2009

You are an amazing writer. The way you put thoughts, feelings, and emotions onto the page is remarkable.

markrohaley commented on My Battle Cry

02-01-2009

nice writing. what we see is temporary what we hear is real and what we cant see is real. good and evil are both enemies. the tree life. Yeshua is your friend and your God. God is truth. Absolute.

lionjr2 commented on My Battle Cry

01-24-2009

It sounds like you are still searching for truth. I find that truth dwells in Jesus Christ. He is my truth. Jesus said in John 14:6 that "I am the way,the truth, and the life." I think you will find, what you seem to be searching so hard for, in the

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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