My Beautiful Prisoner

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My Beautiful Prisoner

Beast behold... A beauty beckons to me. 
With eyes so solid and ebony granite, 
I have no other choice than to crane like a plant to the light.
IF only to hear the whisper of your voice at night.

With this stealthy whisper, you shall become my willing prisoner.
Chains of love flailing about in curves and twists,
entangling every crevice to crevice, every cranny to cranny.
Procreating a love prison of two, not three, not many.

To finally hear your radiant chimes, to finally flex your thought provoking mind.
You are now, and forever, within inclination, the beauty that is mine.

For this amorous prison cannot be broken, shaken, or corrupted by intruders.
Here, you are as free as a bird, while bearing chains to your two thirds.
The outside just footsteps away, where alien chains lay and prey.
Where alien chains seek to steal a beauty, even if by fray.

With the finality of your thunderous embrace, 
warm yet painless in all expense, with a blossom in every caress,
there is little more than to beckon to my beauty with this:
I have my beauty, and he has his beast.

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WordSlinger commented on My Beautiful Prisoner

08-18-2010

Hey this is cool, the key I assume is hidden huh, lol, a good creative idea here, pretty good, I love it , ty WS

dragonsnap commented on My Beautiful Prisoner

08-13-2010

WOW and WOW again...Such a powerful write from such a young man. Son you have a gift.dont let it waste away If this was your first.I will read each you put out there kILLER WRITE....WRITE SOME MORE

JoshsRoots4Life

08/14/2010

I actually have many more, I just put my newest one on here when I joined. :) If you want to read more go to my website. :) www.tehemoninja.co.cc

Teardrops commented on My Beautiful Prisoner

08-13-2010

i will enjoy comming back to your site time and time again to read the poems you create . You have a lot of talent and please keep writing loved the poem Marie

ApaqRasgirl commented on My Beautiful Prisoner

08-13-2010

that was a wonderful poetic passionate love story you told dear. I throughly enjoyed it......thanks for the wonderful read....love asha

JoshsRoots4Life

08/13/2010

Thank you. :)

Crush commented on My Beautiful Prisoner

08-13-2010

this has gone straight to favourites ! this is stellar. its reader friendly and has heart reaching capability....i thank you.

JoshsRoots4Life

08/13/2010

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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