My Broken Heart Bleeds

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My Broken Heart Sings A Bloody Sad Song ...

My Broken Heart Bleeds

My broken heart bleeds - crimson red
upon my blood stained sleeve.
Ever since the day you left
and stole off with my dreams.

My broken heart bleeds - crimson tears
rippling down my face.
Ever since you left me here
to wallow in my disgrace.

How could you ...
run off and leave me like this,
after all that we've been through?
How could you ...
take all I had to give,
Don't I mean anything to you?
How could you ...
just throw our love away,
like it's dead and obsolete?
How could you ...
Can you just tell me please?
Tell Me Please!!
As My Broken Heart Bleeds!!
My Broken Heart Bleeds!!

My broken heart bleeds - crimson drops
from the corners of my eyes.
Ever since you went away
and left me here to die.

My broken heart bleeds - crimson red
as my life slowly slips away.
Just can't go on living alone
Without you for another day!

How could you ...
run off and leave me like this,
after all that we've been through?
How could you ...
take all I had to give,
Don't I mean anything to you?
How could you ...
just throw our love away,
like it's dead and obsolete?
How could you ...
Can you just tell me please?
Tell Me Please!!
As My Broken Heart Bleeds!!
My Broken Heart Bleeds!!

   

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Teardrops commented on My Broken Heart Bleeds

06-04-2010

Dam Ken you made me cry . Dont let the past rule how you love today . YOu made me feel your pain as only you can do thanks Marie

knight4696

06/07/2010

Marie ...Don't cry! :) lol ... I will never let the past rule me. I wrote this to relaease the pain I was feeling at the time, but rest assured my friend. The Pain has been with Love that will be forever more. Thanks again my friend. :) Ken

am2anangel commented on My Broken Heart Bleeds

01-27-2010

great yet sad write suffering a broken heart is always a trial.

knight4696

01/27/2010

Thanks Angel! This is just okay to me - not one of my favorite lyrics .. Needs some tweaking ..I think. But it seems to be getting good reviews ... Thanks for all of the reads and comments! :) ya better stop it though, you're spoiling me! lol! :) Thanks again, Ken

precpres commented on My Broken Heart Bleeds

12-21-2009

Very Strong. Very Interesting. Extremely Deep. Really enjoyed reading.

knight4696

12/21/2009

Thank you very much Precpres! I appreciate your kind words! ... Ken

MarionYost commented on My Broken Heart Bleeds

12-10-2009

This is awesome.. Quite a 360 from "Unholy Union"... Your style is versatile... I love that... good Job Ken... You're right up there with Moot (Point).. AWSEOME JOB. Talented as hell Can't wait for more. All the best -Marion-

knight4696

12/10/2009

Thx for the Kudos Marion! Ya Moot is one of my favorites on OP he is amazing. I am humbled that you compare me to him. Thanks again, Ken

summerrose35 commented on My Broken Heart Bleeds

12-07-2009

Another lyrical masterpiece!!WOW!!You are really good at this!! Thanks Ken!!

knight4696

12/08/2009

Thanks Summer- Stop it!! You're making me blush! :) Once again, I appreciate your Kudos! Ken

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