MY CITY

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    MY CITY

    I'm in the city of angels,
    where I've left all my treasures
    that have always brought me pleasures.

    I hear the city's song,
    I hear it all day long'.
    the cars honking by ,
    the sounds that never die.

    I've turn my back on this city's light,
    Force to leave it all behind.
    But I've never forgot,
    what this city, to me, has brought.

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    CasimirJash commented on MY CITY

    08-20-2009

    I miss the 90's of my city (Houston) I can relate, I left my city but I'm only 30 minutes away lol.

    MarcusArlis commented on MY CITY

    03-18-2009

    Thats was an awesome poem. I've had to do the same thing in the past year. I think you should revisit the citys lights some day, but thats just one poets opinion

    Miriam commented on MY CITY

    03-15-2009

    this is a really powerful poem it has so much imagery in such a few words

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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