My Credo (Forgive me for my actions)

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    My Credo (Forgive me for my actions)

    Constantly shaking my head
    Persisted on my knees to beg
    To wait for some shred of light
    Seems all is putting up a fight
    Living the glummest of days
    Worried about a future not so bright
    Some days I feel buried and dead
    Maybe I just let to much go to my head
    Like ... Read Morethat of a gravestone, maybe
    this is overblown?
    And that my true consciousness
    is not shown
    My conscious hiding like a felon
    fleeing a crime scene
    Some days I feel my life is that mean
    Wish I could come out this funk clean
    That’s not me though
    Merely a stuck dreamer, with thoughts
    I like to ponder
    Taken onto paths that put man under
    A thunder nobody else can see
    Noises so strong, they could tear
    down the trunk of a tree
    But as far as this path takes me
    Hope that something else could
    awaken me
    Unto the pleasures that are unknown
    A disaster that my gifts are not shown

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    lightcourier commented on My Credo (Forgive me for my actions)

    05-03-2009

    Don't put the candles under a bushel basket! Good word k. Very rappy rhythm. Thanks!

    Nebiyah71 commented on My Credo (Forgive me for my actions)

    02-17-2009

    Yeah!! I like this poem. The rhythm was there. I was with you from beginning to end. It's revealing yet lacks optimism and passion... art mimics life - life mimics art.. welcome existence - welcome life - creativity welcomes you...and so forth. I'm going to find one of your happy ones, okay.

    Niecy commented on My Credo (Forgive me for my actions)

    02-17-2009

    Simply Beautiful!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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