My Prayer To You

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    My Prayer To You

    Holy Spirit, whisper a signal
    Giving me Favor with each Word
    Let me soar free as the eagle
    Not just as as little bird.

    Make me like a mighty oak tree
    Not a flailing blade of grass
    Teach me, while in the Fire
    Even this will pass.

    See me stand like a mountain
    Able to bear even the wildest storm
    Let your Joy flow as a lovely fountain
    And under Your wings, keep me warm.

    Hear me Praise You, from depths unknown
    Consume my life that you have paid for
    Grateful, Peaceful, Joyful I've grown
    Help me realize, I need no more...
                        than You.
                    

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    rippeyrip commented on My Prayer To You

    02-11-2011

    It's you I'll thank for that even though....I'll thank you both
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    Marsink commented on My Prayer To You

    10-19-2009

    So very good to read edifying poetry from a sister in Christ. Saw your comments on Am2's site and thought to greet you in the Lord. His blessings upon you and yours
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    Merlyn

    07/05/2010

    Thank you, Marsink. God's wonderful blessings on you and yours.

    jesusfreake commented on My Prayer To You

    10-16-2009

    just so beautiful.....this poem is so beautiful and i am loss for words....He is an All Consuming Fire...and i love him so much. I can tell u do too...this was so...beautiful and wonderful. Thank you
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    swiftbird2C commented on My Prayer To You

    09-17-2009

    A moving prayer. Me thinks the HS was your muse. Hopefully this will come throuhg into to others as yhey read this.
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    magoogle commented on My Prayer To You

    09-12-2009

    Lovely, gentle heartfelt words, and no notice was taken of spelling as that was not the point of a gentle reader.
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    Merlyn

    09/14/2009

    Hi Loren. Didn't know that was you. I made as change on this poem so people would stop thinking it was wrong. Hope it helps. Than You not thank you. I enjoyed you rpeom and remeber when you wrote it.

    Merlyn

    09/13/2009

    what spelling error? am a proofreader and there are none/ Thank you for your comment

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