My dad .

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    My dad .

    Most times when you say you'll be there,

    I wonder where there is.

    I know it's not beside me,

     because there your always missed.

    You tell me I don't upset you,

    and that your very proud;

    proud of what dad?

    You have always been apart of another crowd.

    You hardly even know me,

    you barely know my life.

    I dont understand, for two completely

    different people, everyone says were just alike.

    But I am nothing like you,

    I'm sensitive and I care,

    for the ones who are around me

    even the ones I can not bare.

    You still treat me like a child,

    I'm far to grown up for that,

    I hate it on fathers day because

    I can't say world's greatest dad.

    You've never been there for me,

    you have never seen me cry

    but you were supposed to be there dad,

    I guess it was nothing but a lie.

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    icu2 commented on My dad .

    02-19-2010

    The dad's today are quite a mess. You sound like you have it together though. Hang in there sweetheart. Make sure you don't fall for someone like him...more of the same...you know? You are a very good writer, you express yourself wonderfully.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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