My Dancing Queen

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    My Dancing Queen

    I've seen the dance
    not shaded
    not invading
    and i want nothing more
    than it to be inviting
    by you
    don't be shy
    don't hide
    now that you have seen me
    be something you know
    be something to show
    I won't criticize
    I specialize
    in feeling good
    so use it
    abuse it
    there is no harm
    dance what you feel
    it appeals
    to me

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    gogant commented on My Dancing Queen

    07-21-2009

    I felt the breath of warm lambs smiling at the sunset in a pastoral painting as I read this masterpiece of yours...thanks.

    wheelsal commented on My Dancing Queen

    07-07-2009

    This appeals to me with its terse pleas. Another good write.........................................

    WordSlinger commented on My Dancing Queen

    02-11-2009

    Theres alot of dancing poems, in the contest, I wonder what the tune is lol dance what you feel it appeals to me , me to

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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