My Daughters

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    My heart was broken by my kids' dad and my ex-husband. I sat in the darkness of the pain for way to long. The light was always shining on me, yet I couldn't see it. My daughters loved me, when I was unlovable. They continue to smile and laugh and bring joy to my life. I have made my fair share of mistakes, but through it all I have been blessed. I was crying about my divorce and acting out, and a friend said to me, "YOU DON'T KNOW LOVE UNTIL YOU HAVE BEEN LOVED BY A CHILD." I was like yeah whatever, and I took it for granted. It's true I think, you don't know what love is to you have been loved by a child. My children's love is so unconditional and forgiving, and I love them more than I have ever loved anyone. So here's to them the lights of my life. The light at the end of my tunnel:)

    My Daughters

     My daughters I know now are heaven sent,
    They are the most perfect presents,
    The world stops to enjoy their smile,
    They are so fashionable and full of style,
    Maybe I never really knew love,
    Until God sent me my daughters from above,
    I hold them and give them all that I can,
    Help them when they fall by lending them my hand,
    Time marches on with each new year,
    Watching them grow always brings a tear,
    They are my hope, my everything,
    I can't express the joy they bring,
    They are my sunshine on a rainy a day,
    When I look at them I know everything will be okay,
    So here are some words to express how I feel about the two most beautiful girls,
    To tell them they are my whole world:) 

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on My Daughters

    01-07-2011

    Awww this is so very sweet. I haven't experienced motherhood yet but your poem makes me look forward to it. Very nice.
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    imalwasymused commented on My Daughters

    01-02-2011

    "They are my hope, my everything, I can't express the joy they bring, They are my sunshine on a rainy a day, When I look at them I know everything will be okay," These lines made me fall in love
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    FordLove commented on My Daughters

    12-31-2010

    You have me thinking of my girls now.... Great right. Your poem put me in a happy place.
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    duty commented on My Daughters

    12-31-2010

    There's so much joy to thank the Lord...... As you look upon their face....... These Angels are your pride and joy.....Blessed with love and grace.
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    FranzJ commented on My Daughters

    12-30-2010

    having 3 daughters myself and seeing them with my wife - I feel every word in your story - thanks for sharing
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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