My Dear Silent Friend

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    My Dear Silent Friend

    I tell you about my day,
    and how it went as well,
    you listen to me carefully,
    catch every word i tell.

    I tell you when I'm upset,
    and what is on my mind,
    you always seem to be there,
    you are just so very kind.

    And when I fall in love,
    you listen to me speak,
    of how I really love this guy,
    and how he makes me weak.

    I tell you all my secrets,
    and all the gossip too,
    I  know you will never repeat,
    what I have to say to you.

    So I thank you for your time,
    and for putting up with me,
    my journal is my life and friend,
    for only my eyes to see.

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    WordSlinger commented on My Dear Silent Friend

    09-07-2009

    Interesting, I have been writing since your age, so stick with it, your poems are good. full of good rhymes, and life. And me too,, my journal is my friend, :)

    rougepriest commented on My Dear Silent Friend

    09-06-2009

    very nice generic style poem here, your style i like and the rhyming is good as is the flow. Simple idea expressed very well overall great job!

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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