My Deepest Fear

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My Deepest Fear

My deepest fear is more than
what meets the eye,
Its the worst of all to me
and 1 i want to die,
I express it so many ways
but keep it locked inside,
It resides deeply within my head
and i never let it subside,
Most people know what my fear
is cause we share it as the same,
Its the one we can never hide
from but truthfully on we claim,
Its the one i neglect to think about
but without it i wont prevail,
Its clear to see my deepest fear
is the fear to let up and fail.

By Michael Smith

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Wakeitha commented on My Deepest Fear

06-04-2012

Great written, I share this with u, we try to please everybody, but there weight on us pull us down and trapp us. Me I had to ask God to deliver me from (man) people. I was free Cause I live life to please only him cause he will never let u down.Please God first and when you do that he will teach u how to love and be please with yourself.God Bless

BreeLove commented on My Deepest Fear

03-12-2012

Just remember in life so many people have expectations of us, our parents, friends and family. But if u remember the only person in life u have to please is u!!!! then as long as ur happy with what u do and where u r in life u will be just fine! do u and fuck the rest! set goals for u and ur life, and then keep it movin ! Bree

NitaBoo commented on My Deepest Fear

02-08-2011

This is a good write and I like it because it is relative to many...

JazzyBaby commented on My Deepest Fear

02-05-2011

I totally understand, being afraid of failing and disappointing someone, or ruining their life. My neice and nephew are like my own children to me and I am always afraid of failing them.

poeticmike

02/05/2011

Thats why you must stay strong & keep your head up for them & perservere thru any & every obstacle that wants to deprive you from prevailing.....

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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