my dream

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    my dream

    my dream

    Though the world may be so wild,with thorns of love
    piercing through the heart,and the sweet breeze of
    the bahamas denying to ventilate our love with its
    ever freshened breeze,all i know is that you are
    my dream.
    The night may not be as promising as it was before.
    the moon may mourn and frown at us for staying
    so long under its umbrella.But all i know is that
    you are my dream.
    An exagerated love may speak in the lips of
    the unfortunate.Though the moon has frowned at
    us,the sun will brighten its light in me,showing that
    you are my dream.
    A thousand dreams,i may have.but non will speak
    that you are not mind.siblings may rage at us,but
    nature will care for us;the caves will nurse our
    heads,the nightingale will sing our midnight
    lullaby.and the oasis will quench our thirst.
    for truly,they also know that you are
    my dream

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    ayyan commented on my dream

    07-26-2010

    A very nice poem - my dream - It gives very good inner thought of the poet and we enjoyed the flow which is adopted. - ayyan-

    Helios commented on my dream

    08-12-2009

    I praise your poem and hopefully one day I shall see your name next to Chancer, Shakespeare, Spencer, Keats...

    1990lh commented on my dream

    07-23-2009

    great poem very nice message great write.............

    UmaAsa commented on my dream

    06-09-2009

    siblings may rage at us but nature will care for us when love is up against odds and you take a leap of faith believing in it completely, that makes you a so much better person wherever it takes you your poem does take me to dreamland, but it does relay a very nice message about dreaming and loving and everything that comes and goes with it, usually brighter hope and greater faith

    simanbar commented on my dream

    11-30-2008

    A fresh and original approach to a theme made to be as universal as it was personal. Good work!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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