My Empty Place

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    My Empty Place

    I cry all night but no one hears
    This is my empty place
    And when it's light I'll try to hide
    The sadness on my face

    I will try hard not to fake it
    That is really my intent
    But when they ask me how I am
    It is so hard to pretend

    The loneliness consumes me
    I don't know what to do
    Ten years ago I didn't know
    If only I had knew

    This empty nest is real
    It's killing me inside
    The boys that I once lived for
    Have all taken separate rides

    Their voices are just echoes
    It's quiet as a mouse
    Now I hear the clock tick
    In the silence of this house

    The days I thought would never end
    As I refereed a fight
    Are now the days I long for
    In the darkness of the night

    My baby boys are men now
    I couldn't be more proud
    I only wish this silence
    Didn't scream out so loud

    Life is passing quickly
    There are many things I miss
    You never value till it's gone
    That daily hug and kiss

    by Fran H.

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    jademelissa74 commented on My Empty Place

    06-19-2009

    "Life is passing quickly There are many things I miss You never value till it's gone That daily hug and kiss" Truthful words indeed! A great emotional piece. Full of reflection. Great Job!

    Frannitek

    06/19/2009

    Thank you very much JadeMelissa

    kenparme commented on My Empty Place

    02-17-2009

    This is very well put-It's hard to watch them go. Good poem.

    Frannitek

    06/19/2009

    Thanks Ken

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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