My Eternal Love

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    My Eternal Love

    You are a treasure in my heart
    so dear with charm and bliss;
    You bring in me the heavenly essence
    and perfume the dreams of my life.

    Your smiles give me courage;
    Your looks, happiness;
    The tender voice you speak
    have a glow in its pitch.

    The glory of joys I find in you;
    The pain of sorrows I never know.
    Your tender love is all I see
    years will tell how much I care for you.

    If there are storms that would wreck us
    and sent us far apart;
    I'll gather the lost strength
    and win you back again.

    Yes, my love, you are so dear to me that even death I will not fear; If that's the only way to have you mine, here I'll die and leave my fear..................
    Necy

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    Anil commented on My Eternal Love

    02-14-2010

    You are dealing with words with care, Human spirit is very delicate.

    Necy

    02/15/2010

    Yes, and entails emotions and feelings that the heart speaks of.

    rasputin commented on My Eternal Love

    08-12-2009

    very very pretty.... great work... well done.... continue

    castlemist commented on My Eternal Love

    05-29-2009

    This is really pretty Necy. You have such a wonderful heart and show it so perfectly in this poem...great work! Jerry

    Abdul commented on My Eternal Love

    05-19-2009

    This is what i call pure love, with emotional strings. Well done Necy

    magati commented on My Eternal Love

    04-27-2009

    the pot of love in your words seem like it never runs out from this words..and thats a true loving hearth....beauitfulllllll

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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