My Fantasy

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    My Fantasy


    It is in my dreams,
    that I know you wait.
    Where nothing is what it seems,
    but I know I can't be late.
    It's hard for me to live,
    knowing you're not real.
    But my soul I would give,
    if it was you I could feel.
    My life would be complete,
    with you by my side.
    It would be such a feat,
    my feelings I would no longer hide.
    I'll run my fingers through your hair,
    it's all the proof for me.
    Just knowing that you are there,
    and by my side you will be.

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    lastyl commented on My Fantasy

    09-14-2010

    once again, great write, I'm becoming a fan of your work!!! Do we all surely have fantasies!!!

    Chaos128 commented on My Fantasy

    12-09-2009

    Seeing ourselves in the ideal circumstance is a dream we all share, double-M. You've done a good job here of making your I.C. known. The more you see yourself there, the closer you'll get. Good marks for this work!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    MiserysMistress’s Poems (17)

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    My Love for You 5
    Object of Lust 4
    Loving You 2
    What you do 3
    My Perfect Love 2
    Passion and Love 2
    The Token 0
    A Test Of Friendship 0
    My Fantasy 2
    A Leap for Life 2
    Lifeless Eyes 1
    Forbidden 1
    Timeless 4
    Your Eyes 3
    Looking into his eyes 3
    My Heart Aches 3