My forever friend

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    My forever friend

    He does not go on vacation.
    He does not blink nor sleep.
    Why would he anyway?
    He thinks you are important you see.

    Every second of your life is recorded,
    And has been carefully planed,
    If only we would listen,
    and follow his sherparding hand.

    He knows your every sin,
    and sees you when you do it, 
    but is willing to forgive you,
    if you are willing to admit it.

    It's hard to trust in something,
     That you very well can't see,
    But he can change your life,
    Just look at what he's doing for me.

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    Nikki36 commented on My forever friend

    11-24-2009

    I thaught it was very nice and inspirational.The words were really revealing and truthfull.

    Savant commented on My forever friend

    11-02-2009

    Very Nice Bio. I had a smile on my face when I got to the end. I guess it's hard not to smile when talking about His goodness. This piece has a kinda nursery rhyme feel to it. I can see the little kids reciting it in Sunday school. Good job. I have one called Identity you should check out if you get a chance.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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