My friend, Thanks to YOU!

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    This poem is for someone who always makes me smile!:)
    Thanks...

    My friend, Thanks to YOU!

    Walking to and fro..

    Collecting thoughts about you.

    What will be the best words to describe you,

    Ah! Now I know, my different friend.. this one’s for you.


     
    Various friends I met and greet;

    Some stayed ,some left

    Some I loved,  some I hated

    Some are virtual, some are factual.

     

     


    Then came you;

    You’re unique,

    You’re keen,

    You’re intelligent,

    You’re clever

    What else did i forget?

    Oh, You’re a clown ?--

     

     

    A clown in pain, as what you said,

     You maybe   mad,

    But that doesn’t make you bad.

    My friend, Thanks to YOU.

     



    Never seen you  sad,

    But you know what’s in your heart.

    Tries to make everybody laugh

    You’re indeed very cool at heart!

     

     Every friend we found,

    Completes one piece of  life’s puzzle..

    Surely, you’ll be one remarkable piece in it.

    My friend, Thanks to YOU.

    You light up my once dim life!



    Co-wrote: RKP 

     

     

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    Lolee commented on My friend, Thanks to YOU!

    08-29-2009

    This must be a very special person. I've known people like this. Usually they are heavy. It just breaks my heart because they work so very hard at being funny, and jolly, trying to make up for the fact that they are obese when they should be loved for who they are not what they look like. Sad little clowns. Well...how we are treated by others will make us react in ways that will cause less pain for ourselves. Your poem was lovely. One itty-bitty typo I'm sure...line five should be "meet, not met." All in all, a great poem and a fine tribute to your friend.

    jammaekas

    08/30/2009

    Hi Lolee, Actually, my friend is not a clown by profession, had only an attitude of a clown:D. Thanks for the correction,I appreciate it. But, I wrote met for i referred to friends in the past. Have a wonderful day Lolee!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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