My girls

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    My girls

    Thoughts race… and scare you in dreams
    I’ve had so many… or so it seems
    I’ve lost you at a gas station running as fast as I could after a van
    When I had a Z28 waiting, my feet did not withstand
    Seen you set up by a cult while they sent me to watch at a distance
    As they took my baby from her very existence.
    I’ve had these dreams too, if you don’t know it’s real
    So hear me out hon, this is how I feel
    I would jump in front of a car to save your life
    I’ll stay in a hospital 5 days until they make you right
    I’ll fight with the school when they say you missed too many days
    I’ll tell them to go to hell, cause you’re an honor roll student that should be praised
    I’ll send you to school when you feel sick
    I’ll be told I’m a bad mother by some bitch.
    I’ll get a letter saying social services is reviewing you
    I take care of my baby do you have one? Do you?

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    Mangus commented on My girls

    07-20-2009

    I feel the same way about girls. There are my life. Wonderful write. You speak to every parent with this piece

    joanlorraine

    11/10/2009

    Thanks again. I haven't been online in a while. Computer problems and no money. I really appreciate your comments!!! Hope I get the chance to read your poems. JL

    NacolleMarie commented on My girls

    03-04-2009

    i love this!

    maryann72961 commented on My girls

    03-04-2009

    great expression, anyone with chidren knows a mothers anguish. very well written. and expressed

    cottonluv commented on My girls

    02-12-2009

    i like this.good work joan

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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