my happy spot

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    I can't believe men don't stop a woman that uses them.... Ohh yeah a user uses a user..... I'm one cause I got used and now we are just together

    my happy spot

       
        False  ,  fake  ,  people.....
    Everywhere  ,  anywhere  ,  all  the  time!
            Why do they pretend to care...
                       Like it mattered if you shared!

         Why do this......?
    What's your point?
             Why?
      How does that work....?

                 Not a stranger in life....
               You knew me....
           You talked me up....
    Ohh don't stop....

                    No don't back up...
            You better not back off....
    You must feel dirty....
    While I feel used......

        Please don't say you didn't lead me on!
     If you read this....
                          I asked if I was to strong!
               You said Noway.........
     Now what am I supossed to say....?

                             I never had a chance....
                       You I can't cry for......
            I am slamming that door..... 
      We will never share that dance...

                                         Let's roll!!
                               My feelings......

                                
              

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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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