my heart

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my heart

if you look inside my heart
you'd see its very dark
you'd see how much i cry
and wish i'd just die
you'd see all things that i've lost
and how my love has no cost
you'd see how i miss my father
and how i miss my sisters and brothers
you'd see death
you'd see all those who have left
you'd see a new start
you'd see a broken heart

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sassysweet commented on my heart

06-29-2009

Very good! This is a good one too. Tells me how you feel, what is going on with you and it tells me, how others see you.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

k9kinnon’s Poems (23)

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