My Heart

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    My Heart

     My heart pounds at the thought of you. I have noticed that you are the only one that can make my heart beat slow and fast at the same time.
    The tempo changes, often. When I am with you, it beats a joyious tune that jumps within me. When I am pulled away from you, the beat speaks of sorrow and lonliness. It feels like an attack on my very being and existance.
    When I fell this I start shaking, then come the nerves, my head, it spins...
    And then you appear here, here with me and my heart beats in that joyious and jumping way, which I remember so well.

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    kpeery09 commented on My Heart

    03-15-2010

    WONDERFUL, Absolutly Fantastic, you have here not just a poem, you have a master piece, that should be shared with the world. I give you 10.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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