My Hell

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  • TheAngelOfDeath
  • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

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This is a peom that i came up with off the top of my head i will PROBLY revise this poem later.

My Hell

"My Hell"


What is life but a way to escape the pain of consciousness
What is time but the length of this torment
What is faith but the promise of false prophets
...What is Love...
An illusion of the mind!!

I am everything I want to be...
and everything I need is me
Why am I living in this black hole
I am all of everything
I am all of what is me
Time is slipping though my fragile hold
You are part of me
I am poverty
This is god's disease
I am.......belief!

Crazy is the one that doesn't respect the ones before him
Crazy is the one that takes advantage of the ones that have scorn him
I cannot believe in this tragedy that is my life
How can I sit here and let my hell...PASS ME BY!

Its because im alive!

......
Its because im alive!
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Its because im alive!
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A poem By: (TheAngelOfDeath)

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beautifuldeath commented on My Hell

06-17-2009

not sure you really need to revise it at all. I really thought it was good.....as usual. though I usually think that about all your work. 10 from me.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

TheAngelOfDeath’s Poems (86)

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"Murderous intent" 1
Tainted soul 2
"Broken but not dead" 1
"Spring,Summe
r,Fall,Winter
" (Repost)
11
"One fine day in the middle of the night" 8
"Restless" Dedcated to her memory 7
"Drawing a Blank" 10
Raging Sanity Prt 4 2
"Raging Sanity Part 3" 3
"Raging Sanity Part 1 and 2" 9
"The Maniac Part 8" 6
"The Maniac Part 7" 4
"The Maniac Part 6" 5
"The Maniac Part 5" 5
"The Maniac Part 4" 6
"The Maniac Part 3" 8
The Maniac part 2 13
"The Maniac Part 1" 14
"The Mirror of Fate" 6
"The Beams of the Sun" 7
"Beautiful Death" 5
"Faith for the Faithless" 1
"Metamorphosi
s"
2
"The Black Flowers Of Death" 3
"The Thief" 6
"The Weary Traveler" 6
"Spring,Summe
r,Fall,Winter
"
16
"Scarlet Moon" 17
"The Replacement" Revised 6
My Hell 1
Soiled 6
The Teacher 5
The Earth's Rebirth Part 2 4
Dance of Death 1
(..From the beginning to the end..) 4
..The Face Of Death.. -7
"Angel of War" 4
(..The Earths Rebirth..Part 1) 2
..Gossamer Heart.. 4
..Who am I?.. 7
..I once had love.. 18
..The Devil's Black Thrown..(I remember) 5
..Thinking of you.. 3
..Forever.. 8
Feet First 10
..Daze of War.. 33
..The Valley Of The Shadow Of Death.. 4
Love..Hate..H
armony
8
..Alone with myself.. 2
Inflicting Dreams 3
Mocking Words 2
Death's Decay 3
The Economy 2
The Road Of Time 3
La Santa Muerte 10
The Calling 1
Waiting to Die 1
The Perfect Death 4
Poetry Speaks 3
Death's Embrace 9
My Life 9
Ghostless Shell 11
List Of The Unholy 14
Despair.. 12
Betrayed 11
The Unborn 5
Pulsing thoughts 6
Decaying Alive 8
Dead Seeds 4
The Suffering 22
Black Label 16
Storm Of The Calm 4
Never Enough part 2 2
Judgement 6
Third Ey\e Blind 1
Face of the truth 3
a wasted life 11
Moving on... 3
Unbreakable 3
Forever 5
Fate 4
Red Rose 11
Dark,Light 1
Eternal 7
Deaths Angel 12