My Hero

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    My hero

    My Hero

    My hero helps me get back you when I'm knocked down,
    my hero saves me from danger,
    my hero guards me from all intruders,
    my hero desirves an applause.

    My hero runs from here to there to protect and to save me,
    my hero has a full 360 view of its surroundings,
    my hero never backs down from a fight.

    My hero never looks down,
    never gives up,
    never thinks negative,
    but always knows life is a challenge.

    "Nothings fair in life", said my great warrior.
    To me my hero is unstoppable,
    my hero strategies their opponents moves,
    my hero blocks, dodges, and attacks all their opponents moves and defeats them.

    All heroes you might have heard have big muscules, have super powers, and have an awesome suit. But this hero, is someone who looks up for us and guides us to a better future.
    Most heroes don't have to be powerful, but must be helpful.

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    daydreamer23 commented on My Hero

    07-21-2009

    great write thank you for sharing such a heartfelt poem,bless.

    Dreamer123

    07/21/2009

    thank you very much as well thanks for everything God Bless

    1990lh commented on My Hero

    07-20-2009

    great poem i luv it i'm glad u have a hero keep up da great work

    Dreamer123

    07/20/2009

    Thanks for the advice thank you very much! God Bless

    theguider commented on My Hero

    07-20-2009

    Whao what can i say!I REALLY DO WISH I HAVE AN HERO LIKE U DO.Thanks a lot,it was really nice.

    Dreamer123

    07/20/2009

    Your welcome! And thank you very much for your comment. thank you. God Bless. :D

    aysha commented on My Hero

    07-18-2009

    That is so true Nice touches... You put nice touches on this

    Dreamer123

    07/18/2009

    Thanks alot again! Thank you for leaving your comments and feed back God Bless!

    PRober commented on My Hero

    07-18-2009

    atta girl! good job and the right idea about heroes.... being helpful is a very rare and beneficial thing. Good job, write on!

    Dreamer123

    07/18/2009

    awwwwww! Thank you! Thank you very much! Mant people seems to like this poem. God Bless thanks for your comment

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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