My hero

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  • Affection

    My hero

     You're so easy going, I love your flow,
    emotionally you saved me you're my hero.
    Always high, I never feel low,
    You've touched me and you don't even know.
    Though these things often for granted taken,
    I appreciate so much and i'm not even faking.
    Your friendship's a gift to me, i have no regrets,
    Places we will go, take my hand and let's,
    Let's explore, this real found connection.
    You are the source of my care and affection.

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    smoothdame commented on My hero

    10-29-2010

    I like the way this poem rhymes and flows it is nice and almost songlike nice job.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on My hero

    10-28-2010

    I love this ode to love and connection. Well done writing about the feelings of newfound joy. Great write........E
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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