My Life Part II

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My Life Part II

Do you want to know how I feel every single day,

Feels like my life is just fadin' away,

Like I have nothing to loose,

Nothing to do,

And nowhere to go,

I'm turnin’ cold so I've been told,

I'm turning into something I don't want to be,

Not the hulk but a hideous beast,

And when I'm sleep I'm twisting in the sheets,

Because all the spirits coming inside of me,

But then I start coughing up,

Spirits because I had enough,

They started calling me names saying I aint tough,

Oh well because I want a new life,

I wanted to die then reincarnate into something nice,

Now days later,

I feel like a new creature,

I feel the prayers from my family, friends and teachers,

I guess what they say about God is true,

He won't put too much on you.

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candicane88 commented on My Life Part II

06-26-2009

that is very true... and this poem is very deep.... lol. dang... i mean realy i will still pray for you and everything... but if you can feel all that happening what will one more prayer do... it may change you a bit er it might just make you.... into you..

cottonluv commented on My Life Part II

05-31-2009

this is some deep shit once again sound like something i would write but all this means is you turning into a man a real man keep up the good work

LadyIntellect commented on My Life Part II

05-22-2009

This is so deep it makes me want to b a nicer person lol nd think of things that r goin rite nstead of things that r not...loved it

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

cbp3216dawg’s Poems (12)

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Tough Road 4
Forever 5
My Life Part IV 3
My Life Part III 3
My Life Part II 3
My Life Part I 4
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