My Life

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    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

    My Life

    My life is but a whirl wind of sorrow and shame..
    Shards of metal, like knifes, lodge in my brain..
    I walk through this..
    Screams calling my name..
    Unphased i go on..
    Displacing the pain..

    Alone on this dark road tattered and torn..
    These voices of the forlorn..I try to ignore..
    They call to me "save me" but yet i reframe..
    I live with the suffering..I live with the blame..

    This wind tears through me like a blade through my chest..
    This constant agony...
    My spirit wont rest...

    A light's in the distance..
    Is this a test?...
    It's the Front Gates Of Hell...
    I died from the stress...

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    andais commented on My Life

    09-15-2009

    Wow...your talent is unbelieveable. The descriptive way you explain sorrow is abslolutely amazing......it is a priviledge to read your work.

    Zephyr commented on My Life

    09-02-2009

    There are poems that anyone can grasp, there are poems no one can grasp, and then there are poems that only a select few can grasp. This is one of the latter. I've felt this way many a time, and have never been able to put it into words. I bow before you in recognition. You have a gift. The gift of words. Very few possess the power to paint images with words, but you are one of those few. Well done doesn't even begin to cover it.

    jonnydgo commented on My Life

    06-23-2009

    Your words are really thrilling, but, you are not what you write. If you are i would have feel the passion.

    kareemrocks3 commented on My Life

    05-04-2009

    such a powerful poem yet u should try to enjoy life and find a way to let go of the pain

    anitadaniels40 commented on My Life

    04-16-2009

    thats some powerful words; you can really feel the pain as you read the poem.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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