MY LIFE

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    MY LIFE

    Life,they say is a bed of roses,
    But amongst the roses are thorns,
    You have no more than two choices,
    Pick one or both but not none.

    My life, I built among roses,
    My destiny, I built around thorns,
    Having few options to choose from,
    But taking chances and opportunities if they come.

    The cards dealt to me by the Hands of fate,
    If I had my way I will refuse but it seems too late.
    Confused?! Oh! let me say I'm sorry,
    To make you understand,I'll tell you my life's story.

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    Tauremini commented on MY LIFE

    11-27-2009

    Breathtakingly honest and raw. Even though this is a relatively short poem it speaks volumes emotionally and digs under the skin. Well done. I was really able to relate to this (even if it's on a lower level). Than you.

    joanna

    11/27/2009

    Thanx, Brett!!!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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