My light, My love, My life

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Well.. Kinda self-explanatory. One of my first poems and one of my favorites as well.. :) Enjoy

My light, My love, My life

The day drifts by so slowly, turning into night
Holding onto the day for dear life
For letting the darkness in would mean death!
For all of the creepy creatures that hide underneath your bed
Are waiting watching wanting to be fed.
To feed on your fears
Your sadness and your tears.
Your fear though you may not notice it, could melt away
with one final kiss..
The kiss you gave me saves me from the night.
For try as I might
Away from the darkness I fight
Fight to try and stay in the light
The light that I gravitate twards is you
You are the light I want to stay
To never leave though you may..
To be with.. Forever.
My light. My love. My life.

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boomboom56 commented on My light, My love, My life

03-19-2011

This writing reminds me of the being who is cold but wants to touch the fire to warm up. Feelings of the heart are hard to get right, but you did.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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