My Little Angel

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I time in my life where the White Dove was as an angel from the heaven's above...

My Little Angel

My little angel,
So fair,
So true,
Who ever knew it would be you?

Since the first time I dared to glance into your heart,
I realized we were meant to be from the start,
And now once reunited our two souls shall never part.

I cast off your mask into the fiery pits of hell,
And realize it is not just a shell.
Your beauty lies from within,
And your purest heart has no sin.

The purity of your soul is like the whitest dove,
With radiant light shinning forth from the heavens above,
Such a dazzling sight it is to see,
Your radiant light next to me,
If only I knew sooner what was to be.

But I was blind by what I felt,
So you should beat me with your belt,
For almost letting you slip away,
Out of my life,
Into an endless strife,
Searching into the endless night so long,
I heard my little angel singing our song.

And so she came out of the heavenly light,
Consuming with her love all of my fright,
And so she called me her white knight.

I had been searching for her into the endless sands of time,
And all along she wasn’t far behind.
So I turned to face this unseen soul,
And gave her my heart as the toll,
I know not the future and past,
But I do know I have found her at last.

I have found my destiny,
I have found my fate,
My true love,
My soul mate!

No more fears,
No more tears,
No more counting of the years,
For time is of the essence,
When our two souls become one presence,
So now I start a new journey of life,
My little angel joined as my wife,
What a rush of shear pleasure,
To have a true love that has no measure!

My little angel so fair,
So true,
Now I do know that it is you.
We will live the rest of life,

As husband and wife,
Destined is our true love to be,
Destined to be written in eternity.

My little angel the white dove,
With the purest love,
And little old me her white knight,
Of the purest light,
Combined as one,
Forever and in eternity,
Written by the Son,
Destined to be one,
Amen…

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My journey is not at an end,
But at a beginning with no end,
Soul mates forever,
White dove and White knight

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icu2 commented on My Little Angel

12-15-2010

Sweet poem! I'll tell you a secret about me. I always worry about the writer of such a poem...that is if it is really how the writer feels. Because when one places there loved one on a pedestal, they forget that loved one will make mistakes, and frustrate them with flaws just like everyone else. But then, it is just a lovely poem. I'm sure your love is strong enough to weather the storms...lol. Good job angel.

angel33614

12/15/2010

No worries my friend, you are correct that often we place unrealistic expectations on our love ones and place them so high up on a pedestal that we they don't live up to the expectations they have such a long way to fall from heaven's grace to the very pits of hell, I am guilty of this I am sure. In truth this poem was simply a testiment to the purity of the love we shared at that time, like all things in this world it was only to borrow and didn't last forever. The relationship has long come and gone, it was a far fall from grace towards the end, but that is for another poem. This poem immotalizes the purity of the love we shared at that time, and even though relationhips often come and go, a love such as this lives on in our hearts for eternity, so I will always hold a small place in my heart for this love, for it was true and pure. If you care to read the conclusion of this story, and I dare to say it is not a happy one in the end, read fallen angel and tornado of the beast. Thanks so much for reading and commenting, it is greatlty appreciated and always welcome! Purity of the soul, journey well!!! with grace and humility ANGEL

carynontherhine commented on My Little Angel

07-26-2010

I think I shall reread this again. Not so much about whom it was meant for but for the true poet in you who wrote this and to absorb it as if I did not know if that makes any sense. I become lost in your poems at times, where nothing makes much sense and I must take a break. But, definitely a ten!!!!!

angel33614

07/26/2010

Thanks again for the review mom, you have always been and will always be my biggest fan, lol! While the relationship has come to past this poem hold the love that we shared as an eternal candle of light, for at this moment in time we both lived in the very clouds of heaven's keep, and even though the memory has now faded into the sands of time, that moment can never be truely forgotten for the love will always be held in my heart. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel aka your loving son

carynontherhine

08/13/2010

Well my poet, reading this one again and getting a newer perspective. I heard you the other day mention that even though you are not with this person that you still were in love with her and that it was special at that time. And I thought, this was a part of you I did not know. That you would not throw this away because of breaking up and leaving that life behind. You are unreal. Not sure where you came from but you definitely are my angel. You hold no grudges, nor bitterness and you do not talk about it. So this write is one that brings me to remember this relationship which I did not favor. However I accepted what you chose because I already had made a pact with myself long ago when Lynn began. I just wanted you to know that I would support you no matter what. I knew you would not stay with your white dove but a few years later you would meet your wife.And the white dove flew far away. Probably not far enough for me. Great poem honey. My poet, my son.

Azzrella commented on My Little Angel

06-17-2010

AGAIN, I LOVE YOUR FLOW, IT SEEMS THAT YOU NEVER HAVE ANY IMPEDIMENT. BEAUTIFUL.

angel33614

06/17/2010

Thankyou for the kind comments as they are greatly appreciated!!! This poem is one of a love of long ago but none the less meaningful, it will always stand as a testiment to the love we once shared that was very pure at the time. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Your friend Angel

SuSpence commented on My Little Angel

06-07-2010

Wow this was beautiful angel. I teared up a lil while reading this one, made me think of my lil niece, she is 8 years old, she is such a free spirit, and has a beautiful soul. This one was amazing. I am saving this one to my favs. ~Spence

dahlusion commented on My Little Angel

06-04-2010

Beautiful, simply beautiful...a true poetic gem. Bravo!!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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