MY LORD KNOWS- NEW POEM

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HT AFTER I WRITTING THIS POEM...I READ THIS POEM OUT LOUD IT STOPED RAINING LOL

MY LORD KNOWS- NEW POEM

I May not get up for church every sunday morning and get all dressed up.

I may not be very religulous.

But I am spiritual.

My lord know's that.

I am a sinner

And i am not a saint.

But i do ask for giveness so i can go threw heavens gate.

My home where my farther stays.

Because i'm sure as hell dont wanna be here on judgement day.

My lord already knows that.

 

 

He knows my misktakes .

And sins i have made...but he loves me still any ways.

My lord knows what I think and watches every move i make.

He watches me so no devil can hurt me.

My lord know i'v bin to hell and he brought me back.

My lord know's i beleave in him.

He knows every freckle on my face.

The hazel eyes he gave me.

Every scare on my body.

and my 2 birth marks he planted on me.

Of coures he knos ..he created me

He knows my problems he knows my strengths and weakness.

No need for a confessionial he was ther that day.

 

My lord Knows everything about me.....

and thank him with every breath i take

 

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ApaqRasgirl commented on MY LORD KNOWS- NEW POEM

08-12-2010

that was a wonderful write of inspiration dear. I loved it...He knows everything about all of us without us telling him...thanks for the great read...love asha

dahlusion commented on MY LORD KNOWS- NEW POEM

08-12-2010

"I am a sinner"—there is no such thing as sin, we are here to enjoy life and pleasure, desire and passion, in any form as long as we don't physically hurt others in doing so—unless they ask to be hurt in a passionate/erotic way. let your mind be free of the thought of sin. Really, it doesn't exist.

ListninEar commented on MY LORD KNOWS- NEW POEM

07-23-2010

I came to read ur poetry after lookin at the forums and seeing your "question," lol. I read the most recent one, I wanna dream and liked it but felt something lacking, so I read on. I am a believer as well and I share much of the feelings you expressed in this poem, but somehow it just didn't move me. I'll try one more poem and see what I think. Don't give up though, you love what you do and that is what matters!

1990lh commented on MY LORD KNOWS- NEW POEM

06-27-2010

that was excellent poetry. and your words were true and profound but simple in all its greatness. you know someppl think if they dress up flamboyantly every time they go to church they are some how better than others. but it doesnt matter what you are wearin or even if you go to church every sunday, what matters is that u believe and trust. beautiful write

SuSpence commented on MY LORD KNOWS- NEW POEM

06-27-2010

This was a very spiritual and beautiful write. I really enjoyed it. I plan to read more of you. I see talent in your words. Peace and Love, Spence

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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