My lost love

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    My lost love

    Like a leaf detached from plant,
    today I feel lying in ashes on ground,
    like a palm tree uprooted in storm standing so slant,
    today I feel so purposeless yet having so much to expound;

    It was all due to my insecurity for my love,
    and now that I have lost her I feel like a wingless dove,
    I hurt her once ,twice and thrice,
    and took it for granted that she will be nice,

    But now I don't know if I can get her back,
    I accuse myself,curse and several times attack,
    But she hates me a lot that's a fact,
    and in my heart her love is still so intact!!!

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    optimistic commented on My lost love

    05-06-2009

    Great poem nice use of word and metaphors

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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