MY LOVE

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A description of what MY LOVE is like.

MY LOVE

My love is unimaginable; the stuff that makes dreams,

a myth like a unicorn for it rarely is seen.

Pure and delightful, as a snowflake on the tongue,

Rapture, true bliss, full of passion and fun.

Playful and untainted like an innocent child,

Yet it’s seductive, tempting and amazingly wild.

Desire and fire, pleasurable pain and the shivers,

The answer to life’s mysteries is what my love delivers.

The honesty, compassion, the joy and the sharing,

You’ll find others lacking if you start to comparing.

It’s glaring, the difference, right in front of your eyes,

When you first feel my love but you’re used to the lies.

A surprise, most delicious, the most decadent treat,

When my love is on the menu and it’s all-you-can-eat.

I regret to inform you, I have but one love to live,

The greatest of gifts yet not mines to give.   

Taken by another yet sadly unwanted,

Misused and abused yet rarely is flaunted.

Undaunted by pain I press on, yes, the “Soldier”,

One love for one woman and my task is to hold her.  

Bolder I grow, unrestrained by the pain,

Beaten and battered again and again.

Untamed and unbridled, my love will endure,

Depressed and lovesick and I pray you have the cure.

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vowens commented on MY LOVE

10-10-2011

I did like it and how u keep my attention to all your details in your poem..... I like this line the most: When my love is on the menu and it’s all-you-can-eat.

vowens

10/10/2011

i meant: u kept my attention

phatdaddee

10/15/2011

Thanks for reading and I am glad you enjoyed it! Please feel fre to read more!

Tempestlady commented on MY LOVE

09-21-2011

An ode to love itelf, how unusual. Very exotic in your word choices, and loved the innuendo. Very nice to read, many interpretations or ways to apply to ones own romantic ideals. Write on.................Tlady

phatdaddee

10/15/2011

Tlady you understand the power of the innuendo, it gives the reader the opportunity to inject personal experience into the poem. Once again thak you for reading my poem, I am blessed!

Samaria14 commented on MY LOVE

09-19-2011

Yes, Yes, Yes.....That's what I'm talking about. You put it all in there and left nothing out. My Fav line "A surprise, most delicious, the most decadent treat, When my love is on the menu and it’s all-you-can-eat." What? Did you really just say that? Love it. Perfect 10!

phatdaddee

09/21/2011

Samaria I actually found myself laughing aloud when I read your comment!! Thank you for reading and please read more!

BreeLove commented on MY LOVE

01-12-2011

thank u for sharing .... i think we all can relate, love - hurt,joy - pain, has to make u wonder how we manage to ever love again, but somehow we endure, and move past it, only to fall prey to our own self inflicted game, believing that one day "WE WILL" find that one person who is truly worth it all. Gr8t poem. xo

bubbles12 commented on MY LOVE

11-03-2010

all i have to say is ur a good poem writer i love all ur poems!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

phatdaddee

11/30/2010

Thanks bubbs! I am so glad to hear you enjoy my poetry!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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