My Love

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I really am in love, and this describes him perfectly! <3

My Love

I may be young,
but I have a love,
A love for eternity,
A love who knows my name,
A love that knows me,
A love that talks to me,
A love who cares about me with all their heart,
A love!
I have never sung,
The song of love before,
I know that love is a strong word,
The love I feel has everything to do with who I am,
I am in love but with whom,
None on this site know him,
None in my family know him,
None know of my love for him,
Yes, my family has heard the name,
Yet now I call the same person by love,
My family doesn't understand who I talk bout,
Yes, I'm in love.
I have a love so strong,
I just don't know if my love loves me.
I never say I love you because I'm scared he won't say it back...
I never say the sweet things that should have been said,
I never said anything but thankyou, and I care for you,
He knows my story, He knows my life
He knows my childhood, and where I've been.
I say in my head that I love him,
should I tell him?

What would he reply?
What would he say?
What would he think?
What would he do?
What would be his reaction?
Would things be awkward?
Would things change? How?
What would come next?
I need the next chapter of my story to make my decision clear!
What decision should I make so I don't make a mistake?

I have a love,
And no I'm not too young!
<3 

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Kingwebstar commented on My Love

09-27-2012

Awwww love is great especially when you love regardless if he loves you back. I think you should start off with showing him attention .Don't start off slow friendship then let it flow into telling him. Good luck and I love the write hopefully one day you can give him this poem . :) Love Da KinG

poetryprincess

09/27/2012

hopefully :)

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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