My Love

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    • nanoboy909
    • DAMN! It's been a long time, where all them poets at? I'll be posting some new poems soon. Hope you all check it out. :-)

    My Love

    My Love

    By. Dran Acosta

    Yo baby here we go,

    I'ma take this to you nice and slow,

    blow by blow whatever you want to know 

    I'll be right here with my flow.

    I want this relationship to grow,

    for you baby I'll go on the low low. 

    I'll be here for you I'll take away your sorrow.

    I'll be here for you, you dont have to worry about tomorrow,

    'cause wherever you go my heart will follow.

    I'm feeling hollow without you by my shadow.

    You know I don't want your heart just to borrow.

    My love for you is deeper than shallow.

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    themommyof2 commented on My Love

    11-02-2010

    Very nice. Opening up and speaking from the heart. Nice job.
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    DarkDreams commented on My Love

    10-16-2010

    Wow This is an amazing poem, Kinda like a rap in my opinion lol very catchy, keep it up :3
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    kpeery09 commented on My Love

    10-16-2010

    This is awesome, keep it up man, when I read some of your poetry I kinda feel like you could even speak these words like directly how you wrote them.
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    nonners commented on My Love

    10-14-2010

    wow i loved the flow kinda like spoken word poetry. i just loved it and felt every line
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    Mandi commented on My Love

    10-14-2010

    I do like this but are you writing poetry or a song? I iguess they both qualify don't they? I liked it the way it is but I would get kick out of weeing it in the most formal form and style,.. Like Byron and Whitman and Browning, or Rosettii, or BArrette-Browning don't just chain yourself to papular, but look to the classics --there is a style out the exquisitly yours
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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