My Lovely

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My Lovely

My Lovely

 

 

Bare naked in the winter

Or decked out in summer finery..

Dripping wet from a springtime storm

Limbs tangled within each other

Reaching ever upward, ever outward

No matter what you are doing

Or how you are dressed

you always give my eyes

a beautiful place upon which to rest

My lovely red leaf

Japanese maple.

 

Katylove©2009

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BlackButterfly1 commented on My Lovely

07-22-2010

Very nice. In the begininning I assumed you were writing about a person. Well done.

gogant commented on My Lovely

01-24-2010

Katy, your words, My lovely red leaf Japanese maple shows you are endearing to one of Mother Nature's beautiful things. A superb poem, indeed..............................................gogant

poeticprose commented on My Lovely

08-28-2009

You are a very lovely writer. I love your gentleness and beauty.

freind commented on My Lovely

08-22-2009

very nicely done when i started to read this. my mind went elesewhere? loved it good job

dragonfly1023 commented on My Lovely

08-14-2009

beautiful tree and equally beautiful description. I like the sensual feel of the piece and the visuals it conjurs up :D

Katylove

08/17/2009

Thank you very much Dfly...Trees are naturally beautiful..the way their trunks and limbs grow...glorious!

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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I Choose Not to Listen 2
Sleep Now 10
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Night Scene 6
Barbecue this 6
My Lovely 8
I Can Hear You Breathe 4
My Current Affair 9
Tryptosalad 2
uncomplicated 5
oh you tee~ 7
Jump Already! 4
Faraway 8
See You See Me 8
My Privacy 15