MY MOMENT PRECIOUS

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MY MOMENT PRECIOUS

Let go of the rains on your face,
and embrace your smile with grace
Look at your moment brightly;
there’s no scratch on your heart
Bloom like an oceanbig flower;
I love you my moment full of power
I’m blessed to be a part of you;
I’m with rapt attention your forever you

Precious speedfast moment quicker then the sea,
and all that there can be,
taking me along on your roam
At the moment, you’re my inspirational words for this poem
What does it matter if I’ve broken my sword,
and people’s teeth come shining forward;
you’re always there with me,
to help me further take away the burden,
and bring out the crystallizing star in me
I enjoy, I cry, I scream, I jump, I dance, I sense, there’s always something to learn from you
There would be no poem, no smile, no star, no flower, no dance and no chance without you…

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phatgirl commented on MY MOMENT PRECIOUS

11-15-2009

I love the way your words just flow from the page. You are a great writer. Keep up the good work.

Bettysrainbow48 commented on MY MOMENT PRECIOUS

11-03-2009

One word stands out for this poem. Beautiful. I love it .You wrote well.

Bettysrainbow48 commented on MY MOMENT PRECIOUS

10-31-2009

Hi Sherry, I really think you have a lot of talent. I like your work and your choice of pictures to go with.

SILKYTWEED commented on MY MOMENT PRECIOUS

06-24-2009

Excellent Write.....a beautiful tribute for someone so enraptured by another being...your expressions are off the hook aka beautiful...Thanks!

WordSlinger commented on MY MOMENT PRECIOUS

05-27-2009

This poem is beautiful, the pattern and rhymes are very good, my favorite is, What does it matter if I’ve broken my sword, and people’s teeth come shining forward; , :)

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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