MY MOST SPECIAL DAY

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WHAEN THIS SPECIAL ONE COMES ALONG DONT TAKE HER FOR GRANDTED (AND OR HIM) YOU MAY GET A SECOND CHANCE BUT IS THE GAMBLE WORTH IT? ASK YOURSELF OR BETTER YET ASK THE ONE WHO GAVE HER...THE ANSWER IS A DEFINATE NO!YOU'LL KNOW IT,,,


THANK TO EVERYONE FOR SO MANY GREAT WORDS OF WISDOM AND ALL THE HEART FELT POEMS

MY MOST SPECIAL DAY

THERE WILL COME A TIME IN YOUR LIFE
   WHEN THAT SPECIAL LOVE... EMERGES
IN YOUR HEART YOU KNOW YOUR BLESSED
   WHEN THE DAGGER OF LOVE SURGES
THERE IS NO OTHER DIRECTION
   FOR MY EYES TO PONDER
HOW CAN THIS BE... SHE CHOSE ME                                         STILL IT MAKES ME WONDER
SHE'S  REALLY REAL..NO FALSE FACE
   AT HER WORST A DELIGHTFUL PLEASURE
WITHIN HER SELF THINKING SHE'S ALONE
   I QUIETLY STOOD AND  WATCHED HER
COMBING HER HAIR WITHOUT A CARE
   SHE PICKED UP MY PICTURE
WITH NO THOUGH SHE KISSED THE FRAME
   AND WHISPERED " OH HOWI LOVE YOU"
GOD HOW DO I DESERVE THIS " ANGEL SETTING THERE"
   THESE ACTS OF LOVE SHE SHOWED ME . SUCH A    
           TENDER AFFAIR      
AS I VENT MY DEEPEST FEELINGS ..OF EXACTLY WHAT TO SAY
   THE JOY INSIDE I CAN NOT HIDE OF
"MY MOST SPECIAL DAY"!!!!






A TRUTH SHARED....QUALIN


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jademelissa74 commented on MY MOST SPECIAL DAY

01-22-2010

I couldn't agree with the content more. What an intoxicating essence! I love the passion in which you have managed to compose this poem.

Qualin

04/18/2010

THANK YOU BEAUTIFUL PERSON,BEAUTIFUL SMILE,BEAUTIFUL POETRESS, DID I SAY BEAUTIFUL ....YOUR FRIEND

connsk8 commented on MY MOST SPECIAL DAY

08-03-2009

Woah, lucky guy, lucky girl...that is one of lifes most precious gifts and you are indeed fortunate to recognize it

Qualin

06/16/2010

IM RUNNING BEHIND ON REPLIES MY APPOLOGY..AND THANK YOU SO MUCH..I AM ALWAYS HONORED BY YOUR THOUGHTS..QUALIN YOUR FRIEND

Tempy commented on MY MOST SPECIAL DAY

07-30-2009

thats so beautiful, I like these two I hope you didnt give her up sounds wonderful. let it flow onto you

Qualin

07/30/2009

YEA IM AH DUMMY

cynthiakehl commented on MY MOST SPECIAL DAY

07-29-2009

You definitely have the heart and soul for love! Please keep sharing :)

Qualin

06/16/2010

YOU WROTE ONE OF THE VERY BEST POEMS ON THIS SITE..."CHRISTIANITY"...THANK YOU VERY MUCH...ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND QUALIN

Sara09 commented on MY MOST SPECIAL DAY

07-28-2009

i like the ending! ;) do u just cum up with this in your head?

Qualin

07/30/2009

I WISH I COULD SAY YES ..BUT I HAVE TO SAY IT REALLY HAPPENED T/Y THO

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Qualin’s Poems (22)

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WHAO ! UNTO YOU DOCTOR 18
THE UNDISPUTED KING 8
CLOSED FOR REPAIR 16
The Squeeze Box Boy 16
PEPPIE SAYS HELLO 9
DON'T MESS WITH FAT LUCY 14
"CAN'T YOU JUST FEEL IT" 6
ON PREASTERS LAKE 25
IF YOU EVER SEE AN ELEPHANT!!!!! 15
DON'T FORGET THE MILK AND BREAD 4
OLE' MULESKINNERS.
...JACKASS
6
THE LORD OUR FRIEND...CHRI
ST JESUS
7
A LOVE THAT'S MEANT TO BE 7
THE DAY MY DADDY PRAYED 11
THE WIND SURLEY BLOWS 3
HERE ON "OLE GLORY" 4
A VERY SPECIAL FRIEND 14
having you in my site 5
PASSION OF THE MOMENT 6
MY MOST SPECIAL DAY 6
unconditional condition 8
ESOTERIC TEARS 7