My motavation.

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    My motavation.

    My motavation was all those negative comments
    which were sometimes so bad it would make you want to vomit
    when i started to lose it the lord said calm it
    it started out with small things and graually got bigger
    and i even heard people yell stupid nigg**
    but that made me want to continue and never stop
    all those haters were like one big zit ready to pop
    the main thing i heard was youll never make it
    i felt like i couldnt take it
    when they yelled and screamed i stayed on track
    i tried to stay focused and never look back


    ---Mark Heezl



    deadicated to all those people out there who have ever been discriminated against... "just countine and never ever stop"

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    drewking commented on My motavation.

    01-14-2009

    wow!! ur a strong man..very sharp,, awesome piece of work..keep writing dude your good at what ur doing...

    purpleswan commented on My motavation.

    01-10-2009

    Good thoughts.

    copergirl commented on My motavation.

    01-09-2009

    Blessed insight. i love your outlook, you prove that because others are ignorant,it doesn't mean you have to join them. Wow!!!

    Dusty commented on My motavation.

    01-08-2009

    This is a strong poem, yet it made me feel sad. Good one Mark!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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