My Mother

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    My Mother

    Mommy i love you loads and you know that
    You dont know how much i love and admire you

    Mom you are my role model 
    Out with the sadness and in with the smiles and fun
    Tomorow comes more fun and laughter
    Happeness all around you
    Everyday is full of smiles
    Remember mom you are the reason i smile 
    <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 
                         by aliarkell 

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    cmlestrade commented on My Mother

    08-18-2013

    Even though you are only eleven you have written a very poignant poem. Nevertheless there are no excuses for poor spelling and grammar. You have a gift. perfect it

    Aliyah01

    08/19/2013

    Its not her fault. Maybe she was feeling lazy and using slang or maybe she has dyslexia. It doesn't matter about the spelling, you can still read it and understand it.

    Aliyah01

    08/19/2013

    And anyway she spelt 4 things wrong which probably mistakes.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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