~My Ocean~

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    I love all of nature, but to me the ocean is my favorite. When I am there, I am at peace and smile the entire time. Unfortunately, I did not get to visit this year. So, I did in my poem. Hope you enjoy!

    ~My Ocean~

    The sun is setting against a golden sky. I sit breathless and can only sigh. Soon, it will be high tide. I love taking it all in, placing all else aside.

    Reflections ripple upon the ocean, like tiny lit sparks. Men would panhandle this gold, if only it could be sold. Seagulls cry out for a bite to eat, it is as though, they are saying hello, while they meet and greet.

    The ocean is so blue, sand so fair. I wish I forever could stay there. This is a most peaceful place to be. The only place in all the world that can make me smile and feel completely free.

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    dragonfly1023 commented on ~My Ocean~

    10-02-2009

    I was fortunate to live in a house on the beach once and the years I spent there were the best of my life. I agree with you completely courage. thanks for the memories. This will make a fine addition to the anthology :D.

    courage

    10/03/2009

    dragonfly, I am pleased that my poem brought back good memories for you. Thank you for the comment. Also, I am so happy that it can be helpful to the cause. Thanks! C.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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