my own loss

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    my own loss


    my own loss
    tears cascade from my eyes like a waterfall of lost hope
    as i try to cope with what is but slip off this slope plunging
    to a self denying world that constantly walks a tight rope.

    blood flows from my veins slit open hoping for redemption
    an exemption from this sad excuse of life did i mention,
    an inner intervention of a non conventional life.

    a catastrophy of a reality,the immortality fades when touched
    and clutched the fact that i am a casualty of my own doing
    creating my fatality through duality for this is not the first time......nor the last.


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    Vonn commented on my own loss

    09-01-2009

    interestin. i like it. self reflection and acceptance are very important but i hope its not true. if it is i can't tell from your work and i love how u express yourself.

    NayInLove commented on my own loss

    02-23-2009

    aww it's so heartfelt!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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