My Own Made Pyre

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    Just something I scribbled down at work today, I'd love some ideas or thoughts on it.

    My Own Made Pyre

     On this pyre I made,
    Desperate here I lay.
    Stolen heart, freely given;
    Broken soul pulled under.
    Entire life gone away,
    for the empty words
    of an empty heart.

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    cmlestrade commented on My Own Made Pyre

    08-10-2009

    Excellent, real emotion coming through this one. Nice flow and choice of words
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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