My Poetry

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  • AmandaT
  • Hi, Everyone!! Sorry I haven't posted anything new but I'll be back soon. I finally did it and wanted to share it with you..... "I TELL A STORY TOO..." written by ME has finally been released. Please GO TO WEBSITE: www.xlibirs.com/ITellAStoryToo.html. I APPRECIATE YOUR SUPPORT

My Poetry

Thoughts are flowing in my mind...
actually overtaking my mind
Working its way out to find rest, find peace.
I don't understand why our hearts hold on to the hurt inside...
It sneaks its way in trying to find, a comfortable place to sleep. 
Again,
My body begins to shiver, shake, tremble.
Keeping me alive... 
I find a paper and pen.
These words have a meaning when I put it all together 
in perfect vocabulary, experiencing harmony
In the deepest and most creative way.
I can make you groove to your favorite love song
Make you feel like you're in la la land and then some.
If you would just take the time and get to know me,
I promise this bond that we have, will always be there. 
I will lay your head down and make you feel emotions 
that you never knew existed. 
I skim scrabble with my words
I scribble doodle with my pen, 
Thinking that with my life's purpose
this piece might fall into the right hands...
and possibly save a life.
I live through words...
Tongue swirls in my mouth, 
Pushing and fighting it's way out, 
Spittin rhymes of intoxicating moments,
Flourishing this love that will leave you breathless...
Its timeless.
You know, 
that unconditional love making
When I see into your eyes and you're peering through mine,
trying to figure out my soul.
Now, I see you're feeling this...
You're examining freely, just watching how my body is luxurious...
heart becomes speechless, in an intensifying way.
Im programmed to be "just" for you...
be the head leader but at the same time, follow your every move.
I guess what I'm trying to say, is that I love you..
My poetry...My God!

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SILKYTWEED commented on My Poetry

07-10-2010

Beautifully Expressive right...that has me cheering cuz I warmly relate to your wonderfully expressed sentiment....thanks for sharing!

DeepEclipse commented on My Poetry

05-11-2010

Intense with feeling. I do like how poetry can shape itself to be whatever is needed. To fill the void. Well written with good emotion.

AmandaT

05/11/2010

Thank you ...I very much appreciate your comments. -God Bless-

StandingBear commented on My Poetry

05-07-2010

Yes, poetry cures all .. it is passion following it's own shadow .. echoing where echo's don't exist .. poetry is complete bliss! Great!

soulwriter commented on My Poetry

04-30-2010

I do feel this - I am one with your feelings for I share the same love affair... "I skim scrabble with my words - I scribble doodle with my pen" The unique picture is painted to perfection for the pen is a mighty sword which from its staff lays upon the parchment many gentle lovers who take life from the visions of our souls! 10

stellar commented on My Poetry

03-02-2010

What a dedication to art! powerful poem....i love it...i can feel the same way too every time i write...the creative impulse can't just relax and find its own way to express it....^_^ v

AmandaT

03/02/2010

Thank you for your comment Stellar! Im glad that you enjoyed it and can relate.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

AmandaT’s Poems (13)

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Title Comments
A Moment In Time For You 3
Colors of You 11
God's Conversation with Me 8
My Poetry 14
Wonderin'...W
hy?
5
Perfect for Me...Imperfec
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You Sanctify 9
Tell Me Something 9
Elements of Physical Love 6
Don't Love Me 6
Lust Fairy 6
My Power 6
My Sister 3