My Poison

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    My Poison

     Sail away , the feuding heart,
     on a sunset, torn apart.
    can a soul be so cursed?
    when love is a dirge
    and a curse.
    a poison to purge.
    where monsters hide,
    the dead shall rise
    and I rip out my eyes
    from these confines
    and sacrifice all I know
    while phantoms hold
    secrets never told.
    Sadness, my eternal friend.
    A fiend whose grasp
    shall never end.
    There will be no deliberation
    when the hatred consumes
    and the confalguration
    burns all down.
    The dance of the macabre
    and I its clown.

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    angel33614 commented on My Poison

    09-06-2010

    Fantastic write me new friend, very insightful and introspective to say the least, bravo! The poison of one's blood is often self imposed, the worst enemy is often found within. The recesses of darkness and shadows that consumes one's mind is often a place created in the abyss of the night, as the moonlight of the eve speaks to the howling moon. Children of the night cursed to wonder the lands of the lost for all eternity. Perhaps I see, perhaps I am blind. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! with grace and humility ANGEL
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    drakenette13 commented on My Poison

    08-14-2010

    I too, know the feeling in this poem. To feel like your all alone, while everyone around you is happy and in love. Or the feeling that you don't ever deserve to be loved. The sadness omitting from this makes it pretty ominous....
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    thecross commented on My Poison

    08-13-2010

    Nice write Vampire, as usual good emotion used here from the dark side.
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