My Prison

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My Prison

It's been 7 years since we said "I Do"
Every day I'm reminded of what you won't do

You never have time for what needs to be done;
Yet expect so much from everyone

Your own agenda is so important to your kind,
Just once someone else's should pop into your mind

The days run together like melted wax,
Constantly I'm reminded of what you lack

Memories of our courtship still clutter my mind
With thoughts of "how could I have been so blind"

So now I am left with my final decision;
I must leave you now and Escape this Prison.

Donna M Orsino

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earthly commented on My Prison

03-05-2010

Do what's right for you-if it feels like a prison-get out!!-life is too short-nice write...Earthly

Stryx commented on My Prison

10-12-2009

Good rejection - But don't you go and get bitter now - ya hear?

dmo8647

10/12/2009

No I am not bitter at all, just putting it all behind me and moving on. Thanks Stryx for your thoughts and comments.

SILKYTWEED commented on My Prison

09-22-2009

Wow...a Powerful and Meaningful Write and though serious and heart felt I couldn't felt but laugh at how easily you expressed your feelings...yes a Prison indeed....(Bravo, clapping)...Thanks for sharing!

dmo8647

09/22/2009

Thanks for your comments again!! I did not have any problem at all composing this poem...it says it all!!

Romano commented on My Prison

06-16-2009

sad enough marriage has lost its sanctity and respect, somewhere along the line we forget to care for the one we join with and tend to live how we want without regard to them or they feelings. where have all the true marriages gone, or better yet where have all the morals gone, its about sacrifice thats worthy of love and attention with happiness until the end, and for many especially in this day and time 7 years is long, but remember one thing the number seven is the number of completion, the day God rested after creating woman. I love it the poem is one of my favs for sure

dmo8647

06/18/2009

thank you so much Romano....I have moved on, I have continined on with my life.

AmadeusEx commented on My Prison

06-15-2009

that wasnt so much a poem as a letter of intent ...give that to the divorce attorney...kind of gave me shivers...ill give you a spooky well done on that one

dmo8647

06/15/2009

divorce is final....thanks for your comment

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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