My Promises

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    My husband and I were together seven years before we married. I said these vows on  7/7/02 at 7pm.  And I still mean every single word this 7 years later.

    My Promises

    Today we stand together on the threshold of our future.  
    I promise to honor all that you are and all I know you will be. 
    I promise to always love you, care for you, and show you how in love with you I am. 
    I promise to cherish you and all the special things that make you such a great man.
    Today and everyday I am proud to be your wife, your family, your best friend. 
    I love you unconditional, true and faithful.
    I love you forever.
    Today I give you my life to become as one.

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    1Love commented on My Promises

    07-30-2009

    How beautiful these vows are. He is a very lucky man.

    tygseflrpdme commented on My Promises

    07-30-2009

    unconditionally,,, I like the thought, but I'm not wild about the form of this poem. That's not a criticism, just about me and my tastes. Keep up the good works.

    1990lh commented on My Promises

    07-29-2009

    one word beautiful! was that your wedding vows because that was beautiful maybe when i get married i'll give you a call cuz that was awesome.Beautiful write

    MonkeyLover

    07/30/2009

    Thank you for your comments. Yes it was my wedding vows. Call anytime.

    JadedJezzabel commented on My Promises

    07-25-2009

    some of the best vows i have ever had the privledge to read

    MonkeyLover

    07/26/2009

    Wow what a compliment, thank you so much

    PRober commented on My Promises

    07-25-2009

    very nice... and I hope "he" appreciates you as much as you deserve, as I'm sure that's ALOT!

    MonkeyLover

    07/26/2009

    He is a great guy, I'm very lucky. Thanks for your nice comments.

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