My Romeo and Juliet

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My Romeo and Juliet

This is my story of Romeo and Juliet, They were both in love the moment they met.
But in this story the love faded away, This Romeo did not want to stay.
After he left Juliet had no love and no more fears, But slowly came the dark crimson tears.
Juliet soon died from a broken heart, She couldn't stand to know their love fell apart.
Romeo found her laying with blood all around, He wasn't far away but didn't hear a sound.
Juliet was quiet with the way she had died, Her pain and hatred she wanted to hide.
What Juliet didn't know was Romeo loved her with his heart and all, He had came to tell her but instead there he shall fall.
They met up in hell with love and laughter, It was there that they lived Happily Ever After.

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CagedHeart commented on My Romeo and Juliet

01-09-2010

Okay this is one of the sickest poems i have read in a while, good job :-)

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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