My RSVP

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    • FLAWLES
    • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

    Poem Commentary

    Thank you for choosing to read this;  but PLEASE read "Open Invitation" by jademelissa74 first.  Her beautiful writings have been great inspirations to me.

    My RSVP

    I witnessed the passion between her breath and the whispers of the wind.

     

    And I thought to myself this day, is not likely to come again.

     

    She had love to give;  and I drank every drop,

     

    While living through her heart, not wanting it to stop.

     

     

    I erased my past while running through her veins, my dreams have been reset.

     

    I still feel the vibration in my body.  It’s a feeling I’ll never forget.

     

    A tapestry has been created, stitched with thread of steal.

     

    As I entered her dreams, I couldn’t believe, how this dream was feeling so real.

     

     

    I’m drowning sharing this pain, fore I’ve root my fears deep into her soul.

     

    She painting my life with bright new colors, cherishing every hue of the rainbow as a whole.

     

    I’m sure once in a lifetime, a day like this will come.

     

    From an open invitation, that left my body numb.

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    mellanarlin commented on My RSVP

    09-14-2009

    I loved this poem. All of your words just flows together.

    FLAWLES

    10/16/2009

    I'm glad you enjoyed this; but I myst let it be known that if is weren't for "open Invitation" by JADEMELISSA74 "MY RSVP" would not have been written. Please go to her page and read it. She is an excellent writer. I owe some of my work to her.

    BraveMoon commented on My RSVP

    08-19-2009

    to enter a private conversation... pardon, I applaud her ability to stimulate your mind, but not leave It numb... Asvnasdi! Wah'do

    FLAWLES

    10/16/2009

    No pardon needed enter anytime. JADEMELISSA74 surely deserves all the applauds that comes her way. You have no idea the stimulations she provides. Thank you for your words.

    jademelissa74 commented on My RSVP

    07-19-2009

    Nice! You always create a masterpiece out of nothing! Awesome Job LE$! Thank you for being such a wonderful friend!

    FLAWLES

    07/19/2009

    What do you mean nothing? That was written from your brilliance. I just feel every invitation deserves an RSVP. Thank you for you.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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