My Silent Tears of Pain

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    • jerseycrtz
    • Your the one for me, and I'm the one for you, take the both of us and we're the perfect two. <3

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    7/9/10

    My Silent Tears of Pain

     Your making me crazy
    I've never felt this much pain at once.
    Crying silently every night
    the first time
    in years.
    Tears are rolling down my cheeks
    but I cant feel anymore.
    its as if my heart has split
    in a million tiny pieces
    Each one trying to love
    but then you come along
    and stomp out
    the burning flame inside.
    Im all alone
    youve taken away any reason
    to live any longer.
    My friends have disappeared
    School is a living hell.
    The only reason i'm holding on
    is for my family.
    Please stop hurting me
    I'd rather you pay me no attention at all
    than giving me this torture.
    Please just stop
    my silent tears of pain.

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    Teardrops commented on My Silent Tears of Pain

    07-28-2010

    I havde felt your pain and it never stops you just learn to live with it . Love is a strange thing one day it up and the next day its down. You will find teh one who will always be at your side it will happen Your poem is well written and shows a lot of talent . Thanks for the read Marie
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    Papa commented on My Silent Tears of Pain

    07-28-2010

    I can relate. It does get better with time, but you have to look for relief. Hang in there. like the poem. Most of the stuff I write is sad.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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